tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7613963599518183605.post2315364699070190898..comments2014-07-26T07:05:28.642-07:00Comments on Aneshia's EDM310 Blog: Blog Post #2Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03982520178030751850noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7613963599518183605.post-31011914031664730442014-06-05T08:46:57.119-07:002014-06-05T08:46:57.119-07:00"Mr. Dancealot was teaching a dance class, he..."Mr. Dancealot was teaching a dance class, he used"--This is a run-on sentence. You could say, "Mr. Dancealot was teaching a dance class using power-points.<br /><br />"the dance steps Mr. Dancealot he told"--"the dance steps, Mr. Dancealot told..."<br /><br />"The author's proves"--author<br /><br />"by showing at the end Mr. Dancealot gives his students a final exam the students where clueless about which dance they needed to perform and also how to perform the dance."--This whole thing is a run-on sentence. Also, "where" should be "were".<br /><br />"Roberts think that"--thinks<br /><br />"of knowledge like teaching"--add a comma after "knowledge"<br /><br />"to solve problems, this is done"--This is a run-on sentence. "to solve problems. This is done..."<br /><br />"teaching the knowledge the networked"--add a comma after "knowledge"<br /><br />"he was researching, this was when"--Another run-on sentence. It should be "he was researching. This was when..."<br /><br />"topic he was researching, she is there to assistance and support. "--Another run-on sentence. It should be "topic he was researching. She is there to provide..."<br /><br />"the classroom with be useful"--will<br /><br />"I was also wondering at what grade level does flipping the classroom starts?"--start. You also don't need a question mark there. You can just end the sentence with a period.<br /><br />You should review run-on sentences and how to avoid them and fix them.<br /><br />Good job on adding working links! I also think you may have your alt/title modifiers mixed up. The alt modifier is the description of the picture, while the title modifier is the source of the photo. The title modifier is what shows when you hover your mouse over the picture.<br /><br />Good post.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09090374394712895066noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7613963599518183605.post-27520493791174796852014-06-03T15:19:23.988-07:002014-06-03T15:19:23.988-07:00"Roberts think that teaching in the 21st cent..."Roberts think that teaching in the 21st century..." Roberts thinks that teaching...<br /><br />"I believe that teacher should continue to be the main source with the assistance of technology." Do you think that students should have limited access to technology in the classroom?<br /><br />"After watching this video I am totally open to the major use of technology in the classrooms." This is great, and if you put this into practice you will be on your way to becoming a 21st Century teacher. <br /><br />Overall, good job!<br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11195886895647293159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7613963599518183605.post-61740944188560763352014-06-03T10:51:33.434-07:002014-06-03T10:51:33.434-07:00So Davis is leading you to think differently? It&#...So Davis is leading you to think differently? It's time to do that!<br /><br />See what else you can find out about flipping the classroom.<br /><br />Thoughtful. Interesting.John Hadley Strangehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17484977903995419205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7613963599518183605.post-33067487883208197872014-06-02T02:32:51.097-07:002014-06-02T02:32:51.097-07:00Hey Aneshia, congratulations on starting your blog...Hey Aneshia, congratulations on starting your blog. It's a great way to reflect on what went well, and not so well, and to connect with like minded people all over the world. Good luck and enjoy the ride! :-)Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17897933434664765800noreply@blogger.com